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Four Stanzas On Broken Things

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At Walmart

They have clothes pre-ripped

Those denim jackets with the skin torn off, that used to be for punks and metalheads

Those jeans like you've been playing in the dirt, like those knees torn to shreds

Like you slipped

At work

We have a handmade sign

That we got from a guy downtown, that we hung on exposed brick

Which we got when we got the place, which we washed til it was shining and slick

Like a shrine

Here at home

I keep broken jewelry in jars

Bohemian stuff, stuff with black opal beneath an inscription and a charm

Stuff I have stuffed together and forgotten, which a TikTok witch said was a shield from harm

Like the stars

The other day

I found a bird's skull

It was laying low in my green grass, thin and thirsty and picked clean

I picked it up and turned it around, and didn't wash my hands and didn't wonder what it wanted to mean

Because I don't want these omens on my soul

If the world would just listen, I'd pick being dull

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Posted Apr 6, 2026, 1:25 PM UTC

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