Any tips? feels like Im still missing some dmg

https://reddit.com/link/1setcgk/video/308xs63w6rtg1/player

Just decided to learn her cancels today cause papilla is coming back next SO, hoping I can at least clear fearless. Kinda choked at the end of the rotation here tho lol.

C0R1 Mav

C1 Elegy Ororon scroll

C6 Iansan noblesse

C5 Chev SoDP