Oakhaven - Season 1, Episode 1 “Chapter One: The Man In The Woods”

Hello everyone, so this is my first ever completed pilot script. and yes, i used google docs. i know it doesn’t format properly but i had no other softwares to use. It’s heavily inspired by the dread and practical-horror tension of Halloween (1978), The Thing, and A Nightmare on Elm Street. Focusing on the "Supernatural vs. Small Town" dynamics and the unbreakable bonds of childhood friendship found in IT and Stand By Me. Infused with the high stakes adventure and "kids on bikes" energy of Spielberg classics like The Goonies, E.T., and Close Encounters of the Third Kind. As this is my first completed pilot, I’m looking for feedback on the pacing (does it feel too rushed?), the characters, and whether the "Specialists" lore feels intriguing or over-explained.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1020Vz\_iX2gWuyjiyhfEI8Dw7mCzF1kTktNq8c4yhKIU/edit?usp=drivesdk