Resource: LOCI Email Template/Example

We Got This

Dear Sesame Street School of Law Admissions Committee,

Introduction
I hope this message finds you well at such a busy time of the year. I am writing to express my continued interest in attending the Sesame Street School of Law. Since submitting my application, my enthusiasm for joining your incoming class has only grown.

^^The first paragraph is an intro; it just lets them know what the letter is about.

Optional Update Paragraph
Since applying, I have completed my degree in astrophysics, won a Nobel Peace Prize, and have been promoted to CEO of Lawry's Seasoned Salt. These experiences have continued to strengthen my commitment to pursuing a legal education and have further prepared me for the rigor of law school.

^^This paragraph is ONLY if you have updates*! If there is nothing to update, then skip this one*.

The Why Paragraph
I remain especially drawn to the Sesame Street School of Law because of the Cookie Compliance & Confectionery Law Lab and Street-Level Administrative Justice Clinic. My interests in access to justice in informal and overlooked systems align closely with the work being done at the Street-Level Administrative Justice Clinic, and I would be excited to contribute to and learn from that community.

^^If you wrote a "Why ____ law school" essay dont use the same reasons, find different reasons that still relate back to your why. It could even be because of the location, maybe you have family in the area?

Commitment statement (Optional)

If admitted, I would be honored to attend the Sesame Street School of Law.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I appreciate your continued review of my application and look forward to any updates.

^^This is important. Do NOT lie to these people. Do not say you would absolutely attend unless you really mean it. Just keep the commitment statement out of the letter.

I hope this helps someone! I know it's been a crazy cycle but it's not over yet!

Posted Apr 9, 2026, 9:18 PM UTC

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