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Visions of us in the living room

A quiet rainy day

Sleepy dogs on their beds in the corner

I look up to catch you watching me

Genuine smiles

I go back to reading, engrossed in my story.

A firm gentle hand reaches into dark hair and grasps my skull

Leaning my head back til I can see the lust in your eyes

My mouth pops open accordingly.

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Posted Apr 12, 2026, 11:29 PM UTC

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