‘Try Again’ - my first published work on The New Recusant.

Any and all feedback welcome. My first published work and I want to share it and get some feedback (not from people I know in person!!!)

https://therecusant.org.uk/recusant-prose-poetic-prose-content/#michael-k-holmes

(For anyone viewing on Phone, I recommend rotating your phone BEFORE opening the link as the site is formatted for PC)

Thanks guys!