"You are my missing rib" I say pathetic!!

I could never say
“You are my missing rib”
It’s possession under
the guise of devotion.

But know this, my dear
I’d break all my ribs
Just so you could be near.

'Cuz what use are my ribs?
Nothing left to guard,
Shatter them one by one,
For you have my heart, my beloved one.

(I'm so fed up by people saying "you are my missing rib".. it boring, unoriginal, pathetic frankly..)

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