English Class Research Paper peer review

Hi, I'm not sure many people frequent English class subreddits but if anyone sees this I wound appreciate any comments / reviews on my research paper. It is due tomorrow and I am just a perfectionist and something always feels grammatically incorrect, it is the middle of the night and I do not have a teacher to bug. If anyone reads it and has any suggestions please let me know 😄 I specifically really struggle with my conclusion sentences..

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