[Complete] [88,000] [Dark Fantasy] looking for readers for my completed book.

Critique

Theo has always felt like something is wrong with him. When his powers finally surface, he learns why, he isn’t fully human. As a demonic force begins to claw its way back into the world, Theo is drawn into a hidden war fought by those powerful enough to resist it. But every time he uses his abilities, something inside him changes. The violence becomes easier. The line between right and wrong begins to blur. As the world edges closer to collapse, Theo is forced to confront a brutal truth: the greatest threat may not be the thing trying to break through the gate…but the part of him that wants it to.

Warnings on \\\\violence \\\\Gore \\\\Addition issues /Mentions of assault

Would love feedback on Clarity, character development, pacing and overall engagement

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1imd45Lq2-WjtgH-8SEP-ewHIrU6lyahp/edit?usp=drivesdk&ouid=114906003382687126401&rtpof=true&sd=true

Posted May 1, 2026, 11:31 AM UTC

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