I am looking for a native Italian speaker

Hello everyone. I need a native Italian speaker who is willing to simply check the structure of the text of my book "OLTRE L'ACQUA", a large fantasy novel of about 540 pages.

The point is: I sent the book to a publishing house and they told me that I have to rewrite everything and find a professional translator or a person with sufficient knowledge to confirm that my text is readable. Whoever reads it, you do not have to follow me or like my chapters, but at the moment I am publishing the beta chapters of the book on Wattpad and I would be grateful if you checked them (the book is finished, but now I am rewriting everything to make it clearer; the book has a total of 19 chapters of 6,700 words each). On Wattpad I am currently at 3.5/19 (chapters) and I think I will finish by the end of the month.

I would be grateful if you simply came to read and tell me where I made mistakes. Your activity will be to write "Good" or "Bad" under each chapter. That's it.

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