The Abandoned Orphanage ~ Chapter 1: The Pink Coat

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Lily adjusted the hood of her light pink raincoat as she stood at the wrought iron gates of the abandoned orphanage. The air was thick with the scent of wet earth and decay. Even through the drizzle, she could see the crumbling walls and shattered windows, like the eyes of a forgotten giant staring down at her.

She shivered not from the cold, but from the feeling that she wasn't entirely alone. Her small hand gripped the gate, its metal cold and slick under her fingers. The gates groaned when she pushed them open, an almost living sound, as though the house itself was sighing, welcoming or warning her.

The path leading to the front doors was overgrown with weeds and thorny bushes, crunching softly under her boots. Every step seemed louder than the last, echoing through the stillness. The rain fell in gentle drizzles, pattering against the roof of the orphanage like tiny footsteps, a rhythm that seemed too deliberate to be random.

Lily paused at the threshold. She had heard stories from the other children: whispers of shadows, of figures that moved without making a sound, of children who went in and were never seen again. But curiosity, stronger than fear, pressed her forward. She stepped inside.

The front hall was vast, lined with portraits whose faces were long faded, their eyes seemingly following her. Dust motes floated in the pale light that filtered through broken windows, sparkling like tiny stars against the gloom. The smell of mildew and rust clung to everything. Lily took a careful step forward, her small hands brushing against the peeling walls.

A sudden noise a soft click, like a distant door made her freeze. Her heart thumped violently, but she reminded herself: It's just the house settling. It's old. Nothing more.

She moved slowly toward the grand staircase. The railing was warped, splintered, but it held firm under her grip. At the top of the stairs, a shadow flickered. Lily's breath caught. She squinted, trying to focus. The shape was indistinct, a dark smear against the wall, and it vanished when she blinked.

"Hello?" she whispered softly, though her own voice sounded foreign in the vast emptiness. No reply came only the soft drip of water from a leaky roof somewhere above.

She ventured further into the hallways, each room she passed more dilapidated than the last. In what had once been the dining room, long tables were broken, chairs scattered, and a chandelier hung precariously from the ceiling. Rusted silverware lay abandoned, as if the occupants had left in a hurry... or had been taken.

A small movement caught her eye. She turned quickly to see a toy, a wooden horse, rocking gently on the floor as if nudged by unseen hands. Lily's small fingers tightened around the strap of her backpack.

She had only just taken a step forward when the faintest sound of a whisper brushed her ears. A voice, soft and almost melodic, yet filled with menace, carried from somewhere deep within the house:

"Lily..."

Her stomach dropped. She spun around, peering into the shadows, but the hall was empty. Only the stillness and her own heavy breathing remained.

Shaking off her fear, she forced herself onward, telling herself that the house was empty, that it only seemed alive because she wanted it to be scary. But deep down, she knew something was watching. Waiting.

At the end of the hallway, a door hung crooked on its hinges. Light from the outside flickered faintly through the cracks, casting pale lines across the floor. Lily approached, curiosity pressing her forward despite her fear. She pushed the door open and stepped inside.

The room was a classroom, small desks arranged in neat rows that had long since fallen into ruin. Chalkboards hung cracked on the walls, faded scrawls still visible in the dust. And on one of the desks, a small notebook lay open. Lily knelt to look at it.

The page was filled with childish handwriting, a list of names: children who had once lived here. At the bottom of the page, scrawled in a frantic hand, were the words:

"Don't let her see you. Don't look in the dark."

Lily's fingers trembled. She closed the notebook and pressed herself against the wall. Her pink coat felt like a small shield, but it could not protect her from the growing sense of dread. Something was in the house with her, something patient, watching, waiting.

And from somewhere above, she heard it: the faintest creak of a floorboard, deliberate and slow, like the first note of a terrible song.

Lily swallowed hard, her small heart pounding. She had only just begun to explore. And already, the abandoned orphanage was showing its teeth.

To Be Continued...

Posted May 2, 2026, 4:18 AM UTC

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