YA Dystopian Blurb

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Population laws labeled Remi illegal at birth. Upon her capture, she is sent to Sunnyside Dormitory, a prison masquerading as an orphanage. The hallways weave an endless maze and it's not just the guards who watch her every move but her roommates as well. Escape seems impossible.

She won't survive long, especially after the supervisor wants her to wait on him hand and foot as his personal maid. Her punishment for refusing? The whip. She can't get out fast enough. But escape seems impossible when she doesn't know who she can trust. With the way her punishments keep escalating, if she doesn't escape soon, she will wind up dead, or worse, her supervisor’s maid.

Please let me know what you think. Thanks for reading!

Posted May 6, 2026, 11:13 PM UTC

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