What’re you lookin’ at

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A FIRE!
“It’s in the eyes, chico, they never lie.”
Robert then glances knowingly at the woman who is god.
Here, right now is a light not to be encompassed, but expanding.
Much like the egg, who sits under a bosom until the day it soars the heavens, then back again.
It’s metamorphosis a familiar song.
I can sing it too!
But don’t watch me!
Hey!! What’re you lookin’ AT!?!

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Posted May 7, 2026, 7:42 AM UTC

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