The perfect time to murder someone

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Your sight is to her eyes

As this pen is to my paper

When you groove around her window

Waiting to sedate her

While the muse sings in the light

And snakes slither in the dark

Day by day, night by night

Her silhouette has left a mark

I’ll watch you today

And bury in my sorrow

Watch you watching her

Yesterday and tomorrow

She smokes cigars

But I drink whisky

Wears fancy scarves

But I’m not that lucky

A coincidence when you passed by me

I dropped my pocket knife

Only for you to discover

I had taken away her life

Posted May 7, 2026, 11:41 AM UTC

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