Looking for honest feedback on a dark introspective track (MortalCoil – That Guy)

I recently started releasing music under the name MortalCoil.

This track is called “That Guy” - it’s more introspective, focused on identity and perception rather than hype.

I’d really appreciate honest feedback on:
– lyrics / writing
– overall vibe
– what actually sticks vs what doesn’t

Not looking for likes, just want to improve.

https://open.spotify.com/album/0oEXHBU9dZOhg8PuZjg1IM?si=X-1rLwsvSCSLhepoFgu4JA