[1,392] THE SUN DOESN’T SPEAK

Hi friends! I’ve attached the first 3 chapters of my speculative/sci-fi novel, THE SUN DOESN’T SPEAK. the work is 100% my own.

I’d love feedback on pacing, character execution, and just general feedback/impressions. Thanks all.

Here’s the link to the first three chapters of THE SUN DOESN’T SPEAK:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1a2zu20qDcK0TWnOA2BdmoHUa\_SSJoGycYVczUWwniac/edit?usp=drivesdk

Here’s the link to my peer critique: https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/s/Q0KbvzfP5m

Thanks everyone!