[2934] Bravest Leonov

This is the first chapter of what will hopefully become a short speculative fiction novel that I’ve started. It’s set in a 20th century death cult that follow a leader who is a former Soviet Cosmonaut and is written from the perspective of a man who grew up in the cult, remembering his childhood.

Any and all of your impressions would be hugely appreciated.

How is the prose in general? Are the characters being established effectively? How is the dialogue? Would you keep reading? etc!

It is on the longer side I am aware, so I really appreciate anyone who takes the time on a Sunday to read! Thanks

Link: Bravest Leonov - Chapter 1

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