My Beautiful Sun

The sun never seemed so near

So dramatic in its expression

Bound by void, touched by emotion

By what standards does it fear?

Terrified by its own creation?

Maybe the destination?

As bright as you burn, you carry a tear

No, you seek not perfection

But whispers of connection

The sun never seemed so near

Please stay, cry, no need for correction

Bask beautifully in my protection

As you’re the most beautiful my dear

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