Caverns of connection part nine continuation(test launch for the new structure let me know down in the comments if there’s any problems like if you don’t like how I wrote your characters or things like that)

Setting: inside the rebellion headquarters is alternate Harold sitting in an interrogation room after Borg finished a unsuccessful interrogation.Borg steps out of the interrogation room, going alternate Viktor Harold, the alternate Arin who were on the other side of the one way glass

Borgs:” nothing out of him. The poor man was on the verge of tears.”

Harold looking for the one way glass:” Yep we can see that clearly. Maybe we should get something more intimidating”

Viktor:”we shouldn’t be even interrogating him right now.We should kill him this second”

Borgs:”Woah woah let’s not be Brash here.He’s the reason Me,King P,Milton,Harold, and Arin well, not yourArin got out of that place. He also might have Intel on what their plans are.”

Viktor:” he still worked in that place.Sure he might have freed you guys, but who knows what could’ve happened to him within the last couple of weeks.I mean look at him he’s beating, battered and bruised a couple of days of torture could’ve made him an obedient little dog he could’ve been sent here as a mole to gain Intel on the rebellion.Besides, how would he even get up here the caverns are millions of miles under ground, and the only way to get down there fast are through teleportation, and that train.”

Borgs:”OK those are all good points, but killing him right now won’t solve anything.He still could have info on what’s actually going down there and what we can do to stop it.”

Viktor:”suppose we do get info out of him what if it’s b******t? What if he tells us something like “go to this military base and you’ll find a bunch of top secret weapons”and it’s an ambush?What if he has a tracker on him and he leads those b******s straight to us? I’m not risking that.”

Borgs:”key word what if.We should still keep him around for a while.”

Viktor:” I don’t know who you think you are to make decisions right now.This is my base and what I say goes we’re killing him right now”

Borgs:”if you do that, I’ll shoot you right now!”unholstering revolie.

Harold getting between the two :”gentlemen, calm down. You both make excellent points.but I think we’re forgetting something crucial“

Viktor/:”well what’s that?”

Harold:”your boyfriend.He worked down there he knows what my doppelgänger is like so we should ask him what your universes Harold would do”

Viktor:”I suppose you’re right, but I’m not making him speak if he doesn’t want to. I’m not making him relive what happened down there”

Alternate Arin:”it’s fine”

Harold:”well, please tell us”

Alternate Arin:“I’ve only interacted with him a little bit when I was down there, but he was nice and he certainly didn’t like working there.When we were called into a meeting, and my radio was found, he tried to take the fall for me But Ferdinand…..victor, Ferdinand he did something he looked through our minds, and he could tell that Harold was lying.”

Borgs:”his eye…”

Viktor:”what about his eye?”

Borgs:”when I first went down there with my partners Goob and Garbon he had this weird red glass eye and I look straight into it.He was able to access my mind using some type of sorcery Made my ears ring, . He also did it when we were down there

Harold:“I remember that he had all of us hooked up to some machine, and there was this weird red light. Is that what he was doing invading our minds?”

Borg :Yes, .I don’t know what that thing is that I have something similar*Shows his eye of the snake*I don’t know how to use it, but it’s obviously powerful. He did the same thing to you.”

Viktor:”what else can this thing do?”

Borg:”it can hypnotize people.He tried to do it with me, but fortunately, thanks to my copy I was able to resist it.”

Viktor:”AH HAH!”

Harold:”what?”

Viktor:”it’s obvious.He’s access your doubles mind and can now see what’s happening!”(doesn’t know about the 50 mile/kilometer radiusthing)

Harold:”you know that also applies to your boyfriend, right?”

Alternate Arin:“hey don’t bring Me into this”

Viktor:”well it also applies to you Milton, king P and borgs!”

Harold:”then why would he tell you about Ferdinands powers if he’s being controlled?”

Viktor:”…can we get back to interrogating him please since everyone here is so against killing him”

borgs:”not against the idea.If he becomes a clear threat then will kill him, but right now I don’t think he is.”

Viktor:”so what should we do talking to you didn’t work”

borgs:”….We could hold him over a rooftop”

Viktor:”see now we’re talking”

Harold, looking at his beaten, shaved head variant through the glass:”I have an idea”

Alternate Arin:”and what might that be?”

Harold:”if he’s anything like me, I know just the person who can get them talking”

Setting change:Milton and king P exploring the town of geniso turned into a rebellion base:

Milton:”Wowza they certainly done a number on this place,that armory used to be a coffee shop and that church is where I was possessed”

king p:”a lot of pleasant, and a lot of not so pleasant memories here.Or not really here this is not our world“

Milton:”so what do you think our variants are like”

P:”our variants?”

Milton:”yeah.I mean there’s a victor variant*Shrugs uncomfortably* an Arin variant a Viktor variant, Borgs brother has a variant, and even Harold has one.What do you think ours are like here.

P:”I hope my variants at least doing something to stop this madness here.A kingdom should never have to get to the point where a rebellion is needed.”

Milton:”well I want mine to have a cool mohawk.alternate Vik said something about if you were to go outside your quarters you would be recognized immediately and not to go out”

king p:”hopefully it’s for something good”

*a crowd gathers around the two*

An old lady:”oh my God Its king P!!!he’s returned to us”

king p:”pardon”

A middle-aged man:”no it can’t be him”

a kin:”no, it is him! look!”

Man:”oh my God it’s really him!”

Milton:”well, you’re certainly famous here”

a bystander:”sir, we can’t believe it’s really you.

king p:”huh I’m sorry I’m a bit confused.”

An old lady:”have you been in hiding all this time?”

The crowd starts getting bigger:

Milton:”I’m feeling a bit overstimulated right now P“

king p:”I’m sorry I have no idea what you guys are talking about.Yes I am pinkney but what do you mean I’ve returned to you”

The old lady:”you’ve been gone for nearly 20 years and in that time Artcus is in chaos under the rule of king Michael“

Milton:”oh yeah, that’s right Harold told me Michael’s King here, a while ago”

P turning his head(or brain…)slowly:”and you didn’t think to tell me this sooner”

Milton:”never came up in conversation now can we leave please These are too much people for my liking!!!”

The crowd start closing in all of them asking questions

P:”yeah 100%”

The two would try to make a dash for it, but it was nowhere to run until Crimson horde soldiers,would clear the crowd away*

A human Soldier:”all right get back get back”

*The soldiers would led them away*

Milton:”Woah that was stressful and I guess that’s the reason why they said not to go out”

The soldiers:”yes, exactly the reason, but that’s not why we came to see if you were here for Milton”

Milton:”Qu?”

The soldiers: Viktor wants you Mr. Milton”

Milton:”oh, boyo”.what is it now?”

Setting change back to-the interrogation rooms other side where Milton has just arrived.

Milton:”hey Borgs,Harold,Arin and Viktor How are we doing on this snowy evening?”

Borgs:”doing good. me and Torg our training and he invited me to play poker with some of the soldiers”

Milton:”Awww brotherly, love knows no bounds, even on a multi versus scale. so-what do you guys need me for broChaco’s”

Alternate Victor:“we need you to interrogate your friends doppelgänger”

Milton:”oh.I’m sorry you come to the wrong guy I’m not the threatening type”

Harold:”we don’t need you to be threatening.Just talk to him I have a feeling it will work”

Milton:”OK hare bare.”

harold:”please stop calling me that”

Milton:”you got it!So where do I meet your multi-verse twin?”

Borgs:”right behind the glass”

Milton sees alternate beaten Harold:”oh geez, what happened to him?”

Viktor:”he was like that when he got here. Harold over here thinks you can get through to him.”

Milton:” Al right I see where this is going. you want me to get information.”

Viktor:” yep. now please get talking to him”

Milton:”all right don’t rush me. I’m going in right now.”

*Milton enters the interrogation room*

Alternate Harold looks up Looking shocked:”M- Milton...?”

Milton:”uh…Hey there”

(Part ten coming tomorrow because this has gotten way too long.Please let me know if you have any problems with this structure about how character dialogue is written If you have problems with how I wrote them please let me know.!I want to make the storyline an enjoyable experience.)