Book that I am writing: Hazmat

So I am currently writing a sapphic dark romance. I’m currently 14 chapters in and was wondering if I could get some feedback. Would any of you like to help me with this?

I’ve currently just winged it thus far, but I’m now worried about the framing and the pace of the writing. I’m wanting to escalate things to now establish the romance aspect as well as increasing the morally grey intensity but I’m just not sure if I’m going the right way!!

I’ll include a sheet of triggers in the download for if anyone would like to read my draft. I don’t want to trigger by posting them here!

Currently I am on holiday in Italy but I’m hoping that if I get any comments or messages about this I can send the draft over by the end of the week!