[2383] WHEN STARS FALL YA Literary

I would appreciate feedback on the first 3 chapters of my young adult literary novel. I would appreciate any feedback. Thank you in advance for reading.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/14ialUPXKu-ZgTf6\_IJGgId3Up9rb\_9\_u1O\_CTvh5AUo/edit?usp=drivesdk

My Critique:
https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/s/C94p2VLadm