Honestly, I don't know where this came from. I haven't written in years, then this came to me in less than ten minutes.

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life hadn't crushed her spirit yet

love hadn't siphoned her soul

wounds hadn't splayed her open yet

heartache hadn't taken it's toll

her heart still tender, whole, and pure

not a wrinkle or scratch to be seen

that may be the only bright side

to being forever fifteen

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Posted May 27, 2026, 6:16 PM UTC

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