[1570] Discordant Ch. 2

Hello!

I needed a break from Chapter 1, so I decided to finish my edits on Chapter 2 instead. I’d really appreciate any feedback you’re willing to give—good, bad, or purple.

If possible, please leave critiques here rather than sending them over email. :)

Discordant Ch. 2

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Thank you! K