Can Someone please Critique my Story on Wattpad?

I hear mostly comments that either want to promote my work or very vague comments. I would love it if someone could read my story and give a honest (but respectful) criticism. Once I receive it, I will actually consider the feedback and make changes if necessary.

My story is called The Snow Prince: A Felicorn Summer, and it's about a unicorn cat and his friends who have to stop a sabertoothed cat with ice powers from bringing eternal winter. Clean and simple

Here is the story: https://www.wattpad.com/story/401369855-the-snow-prince-a-felicorn-summer