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“Sly? Now where in the world could my little kit be?”

The young raccoon held in his giggles as his father searched around the house for him. Hide and seek was one of their favorite games to play, and Sly was definitely gonna win this time! His dad would always find him, even though Sly was so small, he could fit under the couch like he was now… but this time would be different! The little five year old had figured his dad out, knowing he was listening to the direction Sly went when he counted!

“Are you… over HERE?!” Connor snatched a blanket off of his armchair, having found Sly there last time. “Hm… Maybe here?” Not under the table either. That's when he noticed a tiny movement from under the couch. The tip of a fluffy little tail, flicking in excitement. Connor smirked, before throwing his voice to sound farther away. “Oh Sly! Where are you?” He said, while creeping up behind the couch silently. Sly was suddenly pulled out, chittering and squealing as his dad tickled him. “Oh no, the police caught you! You know what that means!” “Nooooo! Not veggie jail!!”

“Yep, veggie jail! Gotta eat your greens to be a good thief, little man.” Connor took him back to the kitchen, where Sly’s mother was just finishing up. “It'll taste much better when I tell you what the greens are in Sly…” She chuckled as Connor set Sly in his chair. “Crawfish stew! Your favorite!” The boy lit up as his mother set the pot down on the table, digging in as soon as his plate was full. As he ate though, Sly didn't notice his father's look as he stared out into the night… Locked on the sky…