New song...This one is special I think? I need feedback

Hey everyone,

I just put out a track that is probably the most vulnerable thing I've written so far.

When you're the one writing the words, it's easy to get lost in your own head. I'm really curious to know if the message comes across clearly to someone hearing it for the first time, or if the metaphors are a bit too obscure.

If you have 3 minutes, I’d love your take on:

• Did any particular line or lyric stand out to you?
• Does the vocal delivery feel authentic to the mood of the song?

Track Link: DOG DAD

I really appreciate the feedback! Drop your own links in the comments as well—I'll gladly listen and share my thoughts on your music in return.