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Har hai Mada se pareshan,

Par Mada har Nar se bhaybhit.

Jane kesa yeh Sansar,

Jo mane mada ko viprit.

Jis jag mein nari ka na samman,

Woh jag hai khud se anjan.

Maa ko pooje har insaan,

Par naa maa ki khud ki koi pehchan.

Bete ko maane sab balwaan,

Magar karti beti hi balidan.

Jab tak naa manoge inhe bhi insaan,

Tab tak na hoga kisi ka kalyan.

-Amess

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Posted Jun 3, 2026, 11:44 PM UTC

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