The Tongue - Short - 1 Page

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• ⁠Title: The Tongue

• ⁠Format: Short

• ⁠Page Length: 1 Page

• ⁠Genre: Horror, supernatural

• ⁠Logline: When a mother discovers her toddler chewing on a severed, pulsating human tongue that speaks in her own voice, she is hypnotically driven to surrender her own mouth to the parasitic entity.

• ⁠Feedback Concerns: I was bored and wanted to practice writing shorter scrips as I feel they are harder to pace properly without the plot feeling rushed. What do you think of the script as a whole?

Link https://drive.google.com/file/d/130pBBa8bxww08x6xUCmGdLiwMiVveeh8/view?usp=drive_link

Posted Jun 5, 2026, 4:40 AM UTC · locked

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