The Dresser

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The Dresser

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The dresser

Inside, the key to hope.

The key to change.

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But no.

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Hope cannot be trusted

And change is an excuse.

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I view my key, my way out

Right in front of me.

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The dresser tips— it totters

I stand beneath it,

I feel I need it

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I sit below the dresser,

small as a perched bird…

As it tips . . . and totters

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I tell myself there is time

All that I need

To fly,

To hope…

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But hope cannot be trusted

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So instead I must seek peace

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Let me taste the end,

And find true peace

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Let the doves find me

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And let them mourn

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Like a crow brooding,

I wait for the hunter.

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The final tilt to end it all

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The eerie shrieks of the dresser

The eerie shriek of me

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My hand

the cause

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I knew

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There was never a wall.

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Only me.

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Posted Jun 5, 2026, 5:00 AM UTC

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