Please Critique my First Wedding Video

Hello, I was wondering if someone can tell me what I did good (if any lol) and what I can improve on? This is my first wedding (technically 2nd, but the first one I filmed was years and years ago) and would like someone to review this. Additionally, I really want to film more weddings, but I'm not really sure what to price my self. How much do you think this video is worth, if it is worth anything at all lol

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T836FXobs4Q