New homebrew Adventure set in Arcadia

My party just did the end of Fires of Dis and traveled to Arcadia with the gate town of Fortitude; now they're off to explore what happened to Nemausus as part of the Discovery adventure from Planes of Law. Here's what I wrote up for part one of their adventure, their encounter with an Acolyte of the Lightning King who first suspects, then requests aid from, the party. I'd love feedback

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mBB8SOOrVpile8TokbKx8UArzg7aXcmv/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=101957528090875863034&rtpof=true&sd=true