Vet school essay insights

I’m a reapplying to vet schools this cycle. I’ve grown a lot in just a year, tons of experiences and unique exposure. However, in need of a fresh set of eyes to review and make suggestions on essays. It’s so easy to get lost in your own writing and balance either selling yourself short or sounding like a reach. If you love writing/reviewing and if you’re a vet student please let me know. I’d love some help.