Could anyone who's got a minute just give me any feedback on this blurb please.

18 year old Lily and 19 year old Nova grew up completely inseparable from each other in the small town of Praia until, Nova moved away. Their separate lives would lead to great difficulties as they tried to adjust to life without each other, a way of life neither of them could remember. Lily is recruited by a secret organisation working from beneath her home town. The organisation works to protect the people of the planet from any threat that may arise, this task now belongs to Lily too. One assignment changes everything and from here on out every choice she makes will affect the rest of her life.