Looking for feedback on my solo zine format pocket-RPG "Slime & Goop"

I created a single sheet zine RPG. You take on the role of a would be sanitation worker hero. Two workers have gone missing in the sewers and you're sent to find them or find out what's behind the massive blockage.

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It relies on pen/pencil, grid paper, D6s, a D20, and a D100. You create your hero, assign stat points, choose equipment, and hea down into the sewers.

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You begin by drawing a 100 square winding network of sewers, on each square you roll an investigation check, the dice determines if you find a mutated beast to begin a combat encounter. Every 5th square you roll a D100 and 90 or above you rescue the workers.

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I have creature tables, character creation, innovative equipment effects, gameplay, and the story narrative fit easily onto a single sheet 8 page zine with 90% large text.

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It's my first game and I created an itch.io account and page two days ago for my game Slime & Goop, totally free with no tip option and I'm looking for feedback. A game takes 10-35 minutes to play and everything would fit in a Ziploc baggie if you fold the grid paper.

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link to my game "Slime & Goop" hosted on itch.io

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Thanks in advance!