Need Thoughts on this Book i'm working on!

Warning: themes of abuse, addiction, Racism, and so on.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/12c1pmKmzMP6lHZQRCdA9ed0uzFbh_5T4rAYjdAFJuRU/edit?usp=sharing

this is a novel i plan to publish and i need genuine thoughts and critiques on it. the book is about what happens when the real world and the Mental world fuse together to the very core into one super reality, our main hero is a Chosen one called "The Kitaro" this book has Imaginary creatures, real world animals that have become mutated and anthropomorphic, Living Cartoon People and even Demons from the 7th layer of hell. it has themes of all kinds. it's not finished yet, but i'd love to see your thoughts on it!