Verse review

I wrote this part today unsure of how i want the song to go but i wanted to hear your opinions (The structure and rhyming may not make sense but the way its supposed to be sung really puts it all together and tell me what you understood from the line "The hollow bittersweet...")

Will I ever change?

Will I leave the cage?

Of restrictions I have built myself because I was afraid 

The hollow bittersweet depictions of a never ending rage

Wishing that it all goes away

I wish that it all goes away

Will I ever change ?

will I ever leave the cage

of restrictions I have built myself because I was afraid 

They broke my feeble spirit young enough and made it seem ordained  

Now I’m drowning in all the parts of me that never got a name