[1113] 02 Tiffany
The story is finished. I decided one chapter a week is too slow. I have twenty chapters. So maybe two a week. Based on the feedback I will post it on my substack.
The genre is a combination of college coming of age, mild romance and special education story. Though the overall theme is learning to see yourself and others more complexly. I am happy with the theme and plot and more hoping for making it less akward and wordy. Based on chapter one feedback I put A LOT of effort on punctuation. Let me know what I got wrong.
In Chapter 01 we meet Tiffany, a freshman arriving to college. She values social apperances but wants to do well in school. She has an orientation guide, Todd, who is overtly autistic but "hunky." He embarrassed Tiffany by saying out loud that she was special ed like him. It ends with her running out of the coffee shop.
My new Substack the chapters will all post here eventually.
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Posted Jun 12, 2026, 3:13 AM UTC