song I wrote a few weeks ago is there anything I can work on?

you'll never quite understand what she means
her dad was once so sweet you can just dream
he took her out for ice cream every weekend
her grandma invited her to stay over every holiday

everyone wishes to have a family like that
loving and caring and never caught fighting
they're always together but that didn't last forever
you see

walls were heard being smashed
and glass smashed all on the dash
she dashed in the snow everybody else froze
and she realized that
there was no one there to save her
all there was, was the graveyard
there's no father to save her cuz she was scared of his odd behavior
there was no grandma to favor her cuz she was off to the hospital
and everyone else in her family
had left her to her own understanding

and she begged don't disappear don't disappear

and she begged don't disappear don't disappear

and she begged don't disappear don't disappear
but what if you were never th