The Unspoken Vow

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Even if the world is burning me,

My ashes will find their way to you.

Even if my body froze and became a statue,

My soul will reach you.

​Even if you are not willing to give fruits,

I will protect the tree for your sake.

Even if I am forbidden to touch my jewel,

I will admire it from afar.

​Even if I lose my sight

By admiring my flower,

I will still recognize it

By its fragrance for you.

​I won't say:

My world revolves around you.

I would say:

My world will lose its beauty

Without you.

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Posted Jun 13, 2026, 4:36 PM UTC

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