behind the scenes

a fleeting look, that’s all it was

a mere glance, just passing by.

behind those eyes, a whole world

born only to observe and learn.

and observe she does—

the people around her,

joggers, meetups or little quirks, 

nothing gets by her.

for them, maybe a peep,

for her, stories still not complete.

behind a curtain is where you’ll find her,

often dismissed or just unnoticed,

as she hides away in her world.

make no mistake, she isn’t alone,

you probably don’t realize it,

but you’re still part of it.

I want to make clear that I know nothing about poetry and just write for fun. i have written other pieces and maybe will share later as i have never gotten feedback. i want to improve so please, i welcome critical feedback!

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