LOOK INTO MY EYES - psychological drama, 50 pages

This is my first screenplay, I'm only 17 and I wrote it in like 3 days so any advice people would be willing to give would be very useful to me as I don't really have anyone to give it in real life. :)

It's a psychological drama with mystery elements, following a teenage girl whose recorded court interview forces her to confront an abusive relationship, the impact of a police investigation and the consequences of being unable to tell the truth.

Any feedback on plot, pacing, character arcs and formatting would be really helpful as I'm just getting the hang of it. Thank you :)

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1jPjguZE17wibkGssxnLAvpHLL277jRxw/view?usp=sharing

Posted Jun 15, 2026, 12:50 PM UTC

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