Poem name - My beloved has forgotten me

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My beloved has forgotten me,
Pushed me into an abyss of oblivion
Promises of return were made,
But what lingers is the scent of their shadow. 

Why did you blemish my heart,
With the disdain for dispersion?
Only to give brevity of joy
And a lifetime jaundiced with jade.

How heartless your eyes must be,
For in them resided my consolation.
Now their gaze averts, And all I feel -
Is disdain for which you blemished me with. 

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This poem was inspired by the song - Mohe Bhool Gaye Sawariya by Lata Mangeshkar

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Posted Jun 15, 2026, 12:59 PM UTC

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