What is wrong with my writing formatting?

Being able to write from truth without apology is a strength.

But the moment you let a voice sit on your shoulder whispering, “What will people think?”—you’ve already stepped out of your truth and into performance.

Before my formal education, I wrote from instinct. It wasn’t structured. It wasn’t polished. But it was real—it came from lived experience and honest communication.

Education taught me structure. And I respect that.
But I didn’t abandon my original voice to fit it.

For my first fiction novel, I’m choosing to follow an emotional current.
To some, that’s “backwards.”
To me, it’s the only way the story stays alive.

I don’t need my reader to analyze every step. I need them to feel it. To move with it.

No—everyone will not agree with this process.
No—I am not writing the way I was taught in university.

I’m combining everything I’ve learned to serve the vision—not the other way around.

If you’re using tools like ChatGPT to support your work (for me, it’s because of multiple sclerosis), don’t lose your center in the process.

You are not here to be approved.
You are here to create.

Everyone will not agree with your interpretation.
That’s not a problem—that’s the point.

Take the risk anyway.

Because the greater the risk, the