[697] Doing Myself A Favor

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This is a prose poem I've been reworking for a bit. It does have a narrative so it can be approached as prose, though there are poetic intentions. There's part of me that wants to reintroduce the line breaks I had in an earlier version of this, but I'm not sure about the idea yet. Or just scrapping it and rewriting it as a short story. Not sure about that either. Any feedback and mention of how you perceive this as a poem vs prose vs prose poem would be much appreciated.

CW: Non-graphic SA

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