To Look Fine

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I carved the quill

With a jagged blade,

Bled the ink

And watched it fade.

I spread the petals,

Spilled the wine,

Tore through the silence,

And swallowed the spine.

I donned the skin

Of a hollow design,

Painted the sin,

Just to look fine.

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