[1550] The Princess Of Nothing

[1793 Critique]

This the beginning of my manuscript, The Princess of Nothing. It's a fantasy novel, centered around Rosalina, the reluctant heir-to-be to the throne of Bellum, her country.

I'm wanting feedback on the beginning. Does this hook you in and make you want to keep reading? Are you interested? Thx so much for all feedback!

TPON First Part