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We are born without fear we live taking risk we grow with fear we die leave behind a tier
Born with a cry a baby living to die
A child without fear jumps to see if they can fly
An adult full of fear
Watching all they love die
Life in a tier
Live life till you die
The more you live the more people will cry when you die
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Posted Jun 22, 2026, 2:56 AM UTC

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