I spent 30+ hours animating this stickman storytelling video. I'd love some honest feedback on the pacing and visuals.

Hey everyone!

I've been teaching myself 2D stickman animation over the past few months, and I just finished my latest storytelling animation.

I'm mainly looking for feedback from other animators because I want to improve. Things I'm especially unsure about are:

• Is the pacing too fast or too slow?
• Are the visuals engaging enough to keep attention?
• Which part would you improve first?

Here's the video if you'd like to take a look:

(https://youtu.be/3xQC6mccreU)

I genuinely appreciate any criticism, even if it's harsh. Thanks for taking the time!