[complete] [60k] [High Fantasy] Seeking the Unknown: Yaro

Hi, I'm Kriltch, author of anything that takes place in the world of Kald. I've been working on this story for a few years and is my first full novel written. It's branched off of the original novel I'm still working on, an important enough character that deserved her own story before converging with others.

Content warnings: light gore, violence, Depression

Formats available: online, gdoc, pdf, dox

Timeline: I do not have a timeline for the completion of this novel, so whenever you can get around to it!

What i want as feedback: My primary concern is: s it an enjoyable read. Other than that, I'm looking for pacing, characterization, world building any confusion around world, foreshadowing, plot holes, and the ending

Blurb/synopsis

Yaro, a monster of her own form, tries to find someone the world claims does not exist. She forges her path in a world that despises her, and she it. She will find them, she will not let the one thing in this cruel world that brought her happiness to slip away from her, no matter how much blood needs to be spilt.

Yaro travels across the lands that hate her, hiding and just trying to survive. She learns what it means to be alone, to be with people, and what one may have to do to find happiness in a life so against her.

Critique swap? Sure!