Dolls on a Shelf [4231]

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2nd time posting on this sub, since the 1st time I accidentally broke the shotgun rule.

I'm planning to make this into a 300k-word book, but honestly, I don't really know what to write after the prologue. I got the themes and main conflict down, but idk man.

The doc linked below is my entire work, but I'm not submitting the whole thing for critiquing. I have marked the start and end of my submission pretty clearly. If you wanna critique the unfinished draft, go ahead.

Dolls on a shelf